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The Kingdom of the Sky is a cross between light and peace of hivienquoc is the author I want to send to readers an article about the fall. The heart is always weak and the passion always comes from the ego of a friend who is always weak and not good, that is the cover of the cover that will change over time and feel everything around and the change of time clearly the air and the cool breezes make you think of something that nature is so kind and the rain is also an exception (can I make an exception). (Love Lyrics) Lyrics 1: smile like a small smile absentmindedly with each verse, each confused moment, heart beats erratically, in a time of remembering Love, like the vibration around us, passionate heart, I know how to cherish, when I have you, in a time of remembering, Love is everything, that is love, a thousand colors of love, each rain is also an exception, contrary to each event, who knows that it is love, holding hands when in love is cherishing every moment with you, rap: the meaning of I miss you, a thousand colors are also poetry, hasty love, distant love, very hasty when two people are apart Lyrics 2: absentmindedly with each moment, confused with each word, heart beats erratically, I miss Love..branr..branr, around us seems to vibrate, passionate heart cherishes, when I have you, I miss Love, everything, is love, a thousand colors, special rain, like a contrary event as well as I love you, who knows what time it is, passionate love, love when holding hands, every moment, every time I miss you, those are poetic colors, distant love, hasty love branr...branr..throdr.... Both lyrics you sent have a deep lyrical color, mixed with a bit of modern wandering, creating a feeling that is both dreamy and real. Below is a brief analysis and comparison for you to easily grasp the difference or improve if you want to develop it into an official version:
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### 🔹 **Lyrics 1 - "Mot Lon Nho"**
**Tone**: Dreamy, nostalgic, somewhat electronic or dream-pop if mixed.
**Content**:
* Emphasizes *small smiles*, *absent-mindedness*, *moments of confusion* when in love.
* The irregular rhythm of the heart as a symbol of sudden vibration.
* "Branr... branr..." as an effect simulating emotional vibration/echo.
* Rap transition: expressing emotional depth, "a thousand colors are poetry", expressing love that comes quickly, is distant but full of poetry.
**Suggested slight adjustment if you want it smoother**:
> "a small smile like the slanted sunlight" or
> "a heart beating wildly like an unnamed song"
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### 🔹 **Lyrics of song 2 - "Muon Sac Nho Em"**
**Tone**: More calm, more narrative.
**Content**:
* Opening with "absent-mindedness" - as a way to describe the confused state of missing the person you love.
* Still keeping the motif of a heart beating wildly - but this time full of *passionate respect*.
* The line: *"who knows what time is, passionate love..."* - suggests an ambiguous time, like love without boundaries.
**The ending rap** still uses "branr... branr... throdr..." – suggesting a heartbeat or electronic vibrations.
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### 🎵 Outstanding comparison:
| Score | Song 1 | Song 2 |
| --------- | ------------------------ | ----------------------------- |
| Emotion | Dreamy, innocent | Deep, mature |
| Rhythm | Absent-minded, slightly ethereal | Slow, narrative |
| Language | Poetic, many images | Concise, many real feelings |
| Rap | Poetry, gentle | Poetry, but with more depth |
If you want to combine them into a complete song:
* **Verse 1**: Use the words of Verse 1 – dreamy, pure images.
* **Chorus**: Use the part "Love is everything..." because it is easy to remember, rich in emotions.
* **Verse 2**: Use Verse 2 – adds depth, creates interesting contrast.
* **Rap Bridge**: Keep both rap parts, combine into an impressive verse. Awesome! I'd love to help 🌟 Here's the finished lyrics, a subtle blend of the two rough cuts, keeping the romantic - absent-minded - deep spirit, along with a signature rap bridge. Finally, a suggestive title and suggested arrangement style.
🎼 Song Title:
"Thousand Colors Missing You"
(Or if you prefer it lighter: "In One Moment of Remembering" / "Branr Love")
🎤 Complete Lyrics
Verse 1:
A smile like a small smile
Absentmindedly through each verse
A moment of hesitation, the heart beats erratically
In one moment of remembering - love... branr... branr...
Pre-Chorus:
Like a wave of vibration around us
The heart is passionate like the first time
Every year that passes, I know how
Cherish when I have you
Chorus:
Love is everything, that is love
Thousand colors fall in the afternoon dream
Each rain is also an exception
Opposite to time, but no one knows
That is love
Holding hands, every magical moment
Verse 2:
Absentmindedly every moment
Confused among many words
The heart still beats really fast
When i miss you – love... branr... branr...
Pre-Chorus (variation):
Around us are moments of swaying
My heart is more passionate than ever
I hold on to every second
Because I know… there is only you
Chorus:
Love is everything, that is love
Thousands of colors melt in the sunset
Each rain is also special
Even in the opposite direction of life, I still love you
Between haste and distance
Love is still poetry, still you...
🎧 Rap Bridge:
The meaning of me is when I miss you
Thousands of colors also turn into soft poems
Hurry love – but still passionate
Distant love – still not fading
Branr... branr... throdr...
My heart still waits – every minute, every hour...
Outro (gently fade):
In a time of remembering – that is love...
Branr... branr...
...is love...
🎵 Suggested arrangement atmosphere:
Genre: Electronic dream pop / lo-fi pop
Main sounds:
Soft synth pads
Clean or ambient guitar
Minimal electronic drums, light beats (to highlight the lyrics and emotions)
Branr... branr... effects should be processed with filter/radio FX or electronic heartbeat simulation.
